The wierd cat by Erin

Once on a really wierd day coming ahead I decided to take a stroll in the woods , when I had walked for a little while I found an orange cat covered in bath water sitting ahead of  me. It started talking to me! It said somthing like this I have been separated from my owner could you please adopt me?

I thought the cat was really sad and cute so I took my chance and took it home but I always thought he was really mysterious. He somtimes got really enoying but I cold deal whith it all the time.

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3 Responses to “The wierd cat by Erin”

  1. BroadwayBlog

    Good ideas Erin, and well done for showing you can use paragraphs too.
    Can you spot a place where you should have used speech marks?
    Mrs McMeekan

  2. madisonb2

    Well done Erin amazing work. One thing for next time is remember that something is spelt like this something not somthing. Also can you please visit and coment on mine and my classmates posts

  3. Andrew (Team 100wc)

    I agree with Mrs McMeekan Erin, a great piece of work.
    Super paragraphs. There are some spelling mistakes you need to look at, I agree.

    Keep up the good work!
    Team 100wc

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